 Edmond 2003-05-06 . chapter 1This poem is very well written. I can tell that the author put alot of effort into this. This peom really speaks to me. If only every other author in the world could write this well. |
 lttl696 2003-05-06 . chapter 1this seems more like an expression, its cool but mabey u should try to make these lines rhyme w/ something else. |
 Once in a blue moon 2003-05-05 . chapter 1*stiffles laughter* quite funny. Reminds me of a comic in the papers about two weeks ago. the squirrels said it was "spring training".
good job! |
 Wonky Donkey 2003-05-05 . chapter 1 squirrels are silly little buggers. |
 Psycho-kyugurl 2003-05-05 . chapter 1Red-clad ninjas -- lol. |
 CoolBeans18s 2003-05-04 . chapter 1I wish the squirrels were lke that around here. Hey, can I borrow some of yours to get rid of my little brother? Very funny poem!
~ CoolBeans18s
P.S. - I wasn't kidding about borrowing the squirrels |
 Artemis Astralstar 2003-05-04 . chapter 1i will never look at a squirrel the same way again... |
 Kate84 2003-05-04 . chapter 1*laughs*
I like it:) |