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| Child of Dusk 2005-02-02 ch 1,   | That was beautiful. It really captures the complex emotions. |
| spazticpoetgrl 2003-08-14 ch 1, | oh i like this i can totally hear this being played on the radio. i like it, she doesnt seem mad or anything, its almost like she expected him to cheat. kewlio. keep writi -Spaz |
| BlueMnM 2003-05-04 ch 1, | Pretty good poem..I like the idea, and it's well written..All in all, good effort! |