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| greenfroggies 2003-05-30 ch 1, | Write more write more! I LOVE this! I love the way you made it sound asthough the dragon had set fire to him and then explaned that wasn't the case. |
| DeepDown 2003-05-29 ch 1, | i like that story. its nice... love some of the description in there... i believe in dwagons! i do, i do! -DeepDown |
| Kelpylion 2003-05-20 ch 1, | Very interesting, this is quite an original story. I love the narrator's musing as he is being chased...quite unusual...I like it. |
| PainKiller 2003-05-14 ch 1, | Wonderful. I especially loved the ending. You craft your words so well. |
| Kywen 2003-05-10 ch 1, | Wow, this was good. I mean really good! And pretty. |
| Jimmy Jazz 2003-05-06 ch 1, | Oh wow, that was cool. Very decriptive and excellent story. |
| LadyofPorcelain 2003-05-04 ch 1, | Very nice! Great words, good flow, sweet ending. Love it! |