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| Twilight Starr 2007-12-05 ch 1,   | Poor kid. Bullying is so sad. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| remae 2005-05-27 ch 1, | Great poem yer got there! I love the ending, I mean, first, you kinda thnk, "what happened?" and then you're like "oh..aw!". At least, that's what I thought. Or maybe I'm just slow.^_^ Keep writing! |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-27 ch 1, | wow thats powerful! great work! |
| Alice's Hourglass 2004-03-29 ch 1, | Very sad...reminds me of middle school days. Seems like a good preface to a short story, should you want to try it =) Wonderful! -Mika |
| CentellearSirene 2004-03-28 ch 1, | Tearjerker. It was very well written though. Very true. You truly do have a lot of talent. Use it to help the world with good things. CentellearSirene ps: my friend Elle Knight was right when she said you were a very talented writer.:) |
| Dracula, Lord of the Vampir... 2004-03-27 ch 1, | Not bad. Good poem. Thanks for the review P.S Can you review the rest of my stuff? |
| Stringergirl 2004-03-26 ch 1, | Yeah,i've had troubles with bullies,too,in my earlier years.These memeories helped me think my life wasn't worth living.It's a chilling piece of work,leaves u staring in shock and pity at the end.Keep it up,i've added u to my fav authors and author alert list,by the way. |
| lollierot 2003-10-09 ch 1, | This is good. I like the was you use repitition it is awsome. And the way you end it with the short little sntence fragments is really cool also |
| Passions 2003-10-09 ch 1, | so sad... i hope YOU weren't feeling like that! that wouldnt be good... :'( it really captures the feeling though, good job! |
| echoes of chaos 2003-09-30 ch 1, | well done! extremely well done. the way this is written is cool, like prose story telling. |
| Sio 2003-05-08 ch 1, | This is one of my favorite poems by you please contact me when you write another poem. Sincerly, Sio |
| Rannathalas's Realm 2003-05-07 ch 1, | Hi! I figured out that yer allowed to sign in with yer fanfiction account. COOL! p.s. LOVE yer poem |
| shadowdreamer7598 2003-05-06 ch 1, | Note: In the second line of the poem, there are supposed to be three dots between sentences:Pictures dart through it...walking into school, invisible again...snickers...getting pelted with food at lunch... |
| Rannalathalas 2003-05-06 ch 1, | WOW. This is such a good poem. SO sad! ( I wish I knew a face thingy that was sad) It's a great poem |