Great word choice and descriptions. You have what it takes to be a writer. Keep writing... :}

~`~DarkDragonMoon~`~

It's unqiue and surprisingly it sounds so much like an essay I wrote today during English exam. What a coincident!

First of all--I wish I could could make my rhymes as perfect as that! And the content of the poem was wonderful. I really do like this. >winged one

I liked this poem because of the way it flows, and the way you get your message across. The legend part at the end of each sentence kept my attention. Thinking of the audience however, sometimes repeation of something can be boring and they will loose interest.

That was lovely! ^_^

~Isay

you are very good with a pen there!! ^__^ keep up the good writting!!