Beautiful. The simplicity of language and free-flowing structure makes the work feel like it is struggling to contain the emotions that they speak of. The contrast between the longer lines and the shorter lines bring out an interesting emphasis. A wonderful work.

Real Emotion...
This is indeed true emotion. What is stated here is real.
But we can't go on feeling for ourselves now can we? Words to the speaker: Chin up.

And on a more sarcastic note:
"Emotions swaying in the real world.
I don't want to be defeated
All I can do now is run- I start to hear it
In my heart
You are not alone.
What do can I do for you?
I can hear you."
-Real Emotion, Koda Kumi FFX-2

Well look at the time it's 6:00... time to go to school. Keep writing though Vince, I love your work!
-Cindy Moon *)