I think I understood that... very deep. And well written.

My god, do you have talent..
You are amazing you need to publish this stuff. This is beautiful, really, as is everything I've read that you've written. You are genius with words, you have talent I'd kill for..

Hm... Again, very nice. Also again, need some work on spelling. (Unique to this piece, a few of your 'thees', 'thous', 'thines', etc are misplaced...)

I'm afraid I probably don't have much helpful to say on this... You and I seem to have very starkly contrasting religious views. I'm a very strong believer in that savior you mentioned. :-)

The end of this piece was probably the best. Beautiful!

God bless,

~Taylor

interesting! i liked it muy mucho! especially the last lines...interesting use. "thy" never would have thought about it. hm...