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| La Artista di Fame. 2005-01-04 ch 1,  | abusethis one is really good as well, small suggestion though, instead of using the underlines it might be more beneficial and professional looking if you use italics. Good work |
| rainbowskye 2004-06-16 ch 1, | abuseJust have to compliment you on your use of lyrics within the story and the interplay between the characters...makes it a nice piece to read. Good job! |
| Yakusoku wa Iranai 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseVery good... lovely... This is definitely going into my favorites. |
| Yue Xumeragi 2004-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI realy like this story, the caracters are very human and the different referances are well palced. The lyrics are well choosed as well, I downloaded the song to check, I don't aprticulary like it, but for this sotry it's perfect and feels realy good. nice job. |
| NotEnough 2003-08-11 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue this. Do you realise just how much i now love Alex and Scott. I sat and read all your stories concerning those two \and others/ and have decided that they are one of the most lovely couples to read about. You describe their feelings and emotions beautifully and you can feel what they're going through. Thus, you must continue with them. Soon hopefully... |
| nopinion 2003-06-27 ch 1, | abusethis can't be it... I like it too much. I want way more! I like your use of the lyrics to figure Alex out. I'm enjoying this much more than anyother piece I've read this week. Nop |
| Bitter Berry 2003-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was amazing...Just one page and I'm hooked. ^^ -Bitter B. |
| Lami 2003-05-06 ch 1, | abusethis had me as close to tears as i've been for a long time. amazing use of lyrics. i'm hooked now, this is a beautiful peace of writing and i want more. -Travis. |