|Reviews for Two boats|
| Rigalphantisi911 2/24/04 . chapter 1
that's really sad and depressing. the poor boat... *hug*
| thp41 2/9/04 . chapter 1
This is very sad but extremely good! i really like it!
| Getuie 12/27/03 . chapter 1
This is a sad, clear image of friendship lost... Really something I could relate to... Once again your form did wonders because each new line captured renewed attention of the reader...
| Aimee Raven 10/13/03 . chapter 1
well nuthin to say really, speechless, u r really talented. keep writing, lvoe and good luck. Twilight
| laness aka hikaru 9/22/03 . chapter 1
hey! nifty poem! i like i like! hehehehe
| VercisIsolde 7/8/03 . chapter 1
Gorgeous metaphor. I never thought of people this way before. It's so sad how things can happen to tear people apart. I grew apart from so many of my friends. Funny how life is. My very best friend moved away a while ago, but we're still in close contact. I feel so grateful. Hope your friend saw this. It's written very well. Once again, full of emotion and meant something to me personally. I could relate to it well, and that's what good poetry is all about.
| Laineniel 7/1/03 . chapter 1
Beautiful! Sad and touching, That was really great. I think that's some of the best poetry i've ever read! Wonderful!
| Charlottesunraven 6/27/03 . chapter 1
this is probably my favorite piece of your work...i love the way you've related 2 frieds so perfectly to boats, funny as it may seem, it is a very sentimental subject. and i'm sure we've all lost a friend like that *tear tear*
| cael 6/17/03 . chapter 1
riah, i'm going to have to be painfully honest...Its AWESOME...though its not really aimed for me...i like it anyway!
| Brooke ORiley 5/21/03 . chapter 1
aw! (lots of 'w's in that aw, by the way, since i know the dumb puter will take 'em out) how sad! yet so sweet... ::sigh::
| Kaylana 5/21/03 . chapter 1
| Emma is too lazy to sign on 5/21/03 . chapter 1
I like it, a lot. And I'm not just saying that. I really do like it.