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| Dying Without Gackt 2005-04-04 ch 1,  | abuseI loved that. I can't do haikus - its hard for me to explain in such little words. But this one was a great one! |
| content with rhyme 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseSo true; I can relate. There are so many emotions that come from, and through, music. Nice. :o) |
| PainKiller 2003-07-12 ch 1, | abuseAs a musician and pianist for ten years now, let me say that this haiku has absolutely captured the essence of what music really is. It is an extension of ourselves. Awesome, awesome work. So glad you posted this. |
| Zainab 2003-06-14 ch 1, | abuseEXACTLY! I love music, I can get lost in it. |
| CatieZee 2003-06-08 ch 1, | abuse*Smiles happily* Well, you hit it, all right. Beautiful. I don't usually like haikus, but this was really good. God bless! |
| cosmo-queen 2003-06-01 ch 1, | abuseExcellent. I love music so much and the way you described it is beautiful. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Angelic Wings 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWICKed! I wish I were good at haikus...damn, i can never fit five syllables and seven syllables and then five syllables into ONE poem!! |
| LancerDragoon 2003-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. Another great haiku!! You're really good at this. |
| Free-Writer 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseWow! You described music perfectly! great job! |
| ChaoxAngel 2003-05-16 ch 1, | abuseReading your poem makes me want to write more songs... but I'm hopelessly stuck again. Well, that doesn't stop me from going off playing some ya. Heeh... ;o) ~DW |
| Kesshi Mashin 2003-05-11 ch 1, | abuseWhat a beautiful description of music... keep on writin... |
| Isay 2003-05-09 ch 1, | abuseVery true... It describes music perfectly... ~Isay |
| soulspring 2003-05-08 ch 1, | abusewow... this is awesome. i love the word choice and imagery. wonderful work! |
| Lieschen 2003-05-08 ch 1, | abuseso beautiful...great word choice. sounds perfect. being a music lover myself, i know these feelings as well. awesome ! Elise |
| NatashaRostof 2003-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVery, very true. Lovely piece. :o) I've always wished I could put music into words. I like how you did that |