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| shinco 2004-03-31 ch 1, | Oh, wow! This poem is so beautiful! That was very, very beautiful! You have such a wonderful imagination! |
| glitterjewele 2003-09-03 ch 1, | hehe this was so fun! i really liked it. lots of happiness *yay* :). i noticed that the rhyme scheme seemed a teensy bit forced in one or two spots, but overall it flowed quite well and made for a nice fairy-like touch to the piece. lots of very cool imagery . . . favorite lines were: "pick a jinnyjo where the blue flowers grow," "fastened feet," "watch their silver hair flow," and "blow, and give the faeries their wings!" the individual seeds of the jinnyjo being faeries is *so* enchanting. awesome happy piece! loved it! kudos! |
| vickykeely 2003-07-16 ch 1, | cool poem! very fun |
| msu 2003-07-09 ch 1, | Mystical and fantastical...I know not such a word. I think this is one of my favs of yours. ~Mel |
| ina 2003-07-05 ch 1, | fantastic. well done. |
| Salim Narek 2003-06-09 ch 1, | Very sweet and lovely. Wonderful spunk and imagery! |
| The Inklings Reborne 2003-05-23 ch 1, | Mallakie - Although subdued by a great song i am stealing, I mean 'Sharing', I abosuletly loved this poem. Be a good sport an make a book. |
| Annaicuru 2003-05-13 ch 1, | Jinnyjo is my new word! Heh heh heh. Love it. Jinnyjo jinnyjo jinnyjo la la la la la. Nice rhyming, again. -- Annaicuru |
| Euphoric Love 2003-05-06 ch 1, | hehe...cute |