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Reviews For: The Jinnyjo Dandelion seed stalk

shinco
2004-03-31
ch 1,
Oh, wow! This poem is so beautiful! That was very, very beautiful! You have such a wonderful imagination!
glitterjewele
2003-09-03
ch 1,
hehe this was so fun! i really liked it. lots of happiness *yay* :). i noticed that the rhyme scheme seemed a teensy bit forced in one or two spots, but overall it flowed quite well and made for a nice fairy-like touch to the piece. lots of very cool imagery . . . favorite lines were: "pick a jinnyjo where the blue flowers grow," "fastened feet," "watch their silver hair flow," and "blow, and give the faeries their wings!" the individual seeds of the jinnyjo being faeries is *so* enchanting. awesome happy piece! loved it! kudos!
vickykeely
2003-07-16
ch 1,
cool poem! very fun
msu
2003-07-09
ch 1,
Mystical and fantastical...I know not such a word.

I think this is one of my favs of yours.

~Mel
ina
2003-07-05
ch 1,
fantastic. well done.
Salim Narek
2003-06-09
ch 1,
Very sweet and lovely. Wonderful spunk and imagery!
The Inklings Reborne
2003-05-23
ch 1,
Mallakie - Although subdued by a great song i am stealing, I mean 'Sharing', I abosuletly loved this poem. Be a good sport an make a book.
Annaicuru
2003-05-13
ch 1,
Jinnyjo is my new word! Heh heh heh. Love it. Jinnyjo jinnyjo jinnyjo la la la la la. Nice rhyming, again.

-- Annaicuru
Euphoric Love
2003-05-06
ch 1,
hehe...cute
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