You are quite a talented writer and I most certainly like the way you express yourself. I really enjoyed this piece; good job.

It's a nice poem. The rhymes in the first stanza are great- "melodramatic", "psychotic"- I have a weakness for cool rhymes like that. :)

Some of the analogies are too subtle for me to get, some are rather clever, and some cliched and tiresome, but on the whole they inspire me. I love analogies, and I love poems filled with it, and symbolic, hidden meanings to them.

I think I'll go and write one of my own. :)

O.o...it's so well written...i knew you could write stories but poems too? .

beautiful, just...beautiful