up to chapter 12 already huh? The plot seems to be getting more mysterious with the addition of the new characters

Heh... you've been busy. Is chapter 9 part of the last time?

hey case!
0.o'' oh im so sorry about not R&R, i've been reading all your stories (and they're all brilliant, of course) but i've had so little time, with my job and all >.> oops, sorry.
but, yes, the story is great, and a side view would be a bit wierd since there have been none thus far, but maybe it would add a twist
write in Rusty Cage!
oops gotta go, laters!
~Myrtle

Hmm... the people from the bar keep calling Sora "boy" but I've noted some feminine qualities. Like although he/she whatever pretends to be cold, you can see that Sora actually considers the feelings of others even enemies before taking action and I can almost feel a deeper relationship developing between Sora and Kallai

Very cool story. The mix of modern and medieval settings is very well done. It actually feels like an rpg

Sora= All around fighter
Kallai= Fighter/Healer
Blake= Thief
Vincent= Dark guy who you can't really tell if he's on your side or not.

btw... I like the way Sora finishes off that terrorist leader guy who shot Kallai. (I was thinking of something like, bam, bif, blam air combo K.O.)

I just read the end of chapter five. Actually I think your story is pretty much original. The settings are very different from RK it's just that pacifist character thingy and former assassin stuff that reminded me of the series

this is cloud^ again I didn't login before reviewing this time. Wow! what can I say... you've been really busy.

guess I'll save the chapters to my hard drive and read it later

The life of a former assassin...nice! Kinda reminds me of Rurouni Kenshin.
One thing though...you kept me guessing at the character's gender. Did you write your story this way on purpose?

When I first started reading your story...Wow. Just - Wow. You faded away for a little, rambling on, but I think you have some real potential. Keep up the good work!
Samli

ooh! i like this story! very... er... unique! yeah! totally cool! please write more!! :D