i really like this... i dont know why though... it makes things seem to go by very fast... thanks for the review... you're exceedingly talented

this is so good but the last part is so sad! she grew up! its so time-warping and stuff. (yeah that was really random) but it's cool all the same.

I love this perspective of time. (I'm a photographer so i really appreciate this.) It has a sad quality though, can't quite name it but I'm sure you know since you probably meant to capture it.

very nice. a touching poem.

Sweet , I like it very much :)

hehehe I had to grin at the summary. 'a poem. An INTERESTING poem' hehehe
Fast progress through this one... but very interesting cycle. I liked it

beautiful, moriah. a hint of sorrow, but rays of happiness emit, as well...perfect description of photographs and how they make u feel :)

aw, thats so qt, u have a gift for the simple but ever so sweet poems, i have a slightly more complicated morbid side, ugh, u r soo much better, i admire u. keep writing, lvoe and good luck. Twilight

Very nice, and bittersweet. I personally love taking photographs, hate looking at them. When I think about the past, weird stuff happens. This captures the pasing of life well and, though it seems to be just a list, I sense a little more in it than that. Don't ask me what. It's good. :)

Luv

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i love poems like this! ones that pass through times, that is. and the way each line flows into the next one makes the poem a very good read. another success!

Awesome as always Riah! Great plot, very original! I'll R&R more later! Love ya bunches!

Hey hey. Its OJ right here (Orange Joo).

This the hot joint right here! Off the heezee :)

Enough of the ebonics...if u didnt know what i said it translates to "Those are some pretty good pieces of literature you have there, Moriah." Keep up the good writing :) I know ull get famous for this stuff

TTyl

oh, i likes. very nice. cute, sweet, sentimental.

lol, i know i'm mean. i've been told so often enough. if you wanna see some meanness of mine that is not entirely my own, keep watching my profile. in a day or two (hopefully) my friend will have posted our joint story, and i will be able to direct you to it. it's got kit in it! (and i am afraid i am slightly mean to her, too. but not as mean as i am to kayleigh) :D

anyway, thanks for reviewing! made my day!

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Very nice, I like it. It's very nice and pretty and stoof.