Wow, that was kinda sad, but very heartfelt. Jeez you write good poetry! I'm so jealous! Like I said, definately keep it up because I think you are awesome. -AB

good job...thanks for the review...god bless ya!

my friend... u have talent :):) keep it up :)

Nice poem! hope this isn't really what you're feeling :-/

the analogy seemed a little forced at times - did you need every single line? - but overall, very nice way of capturing an emotion. keep up the great work.