|Reviews for The Cheesewagon|
| Prowling Muse 3/17/04 . chapter 1
*cough* *cough* Ack... water... milk... any hypotonic solution to wash down the layers of dry, crumbly, and suffocating material you've warped around a concept I already swallow everyday.
| da kiwi 5/28/03 . chapter 1
yeah, um, i have paragraph issues, could you break this down nice and smallish so that ican read it and write a real review? thankies if you can, and um... well...my brain is dead so i cant think of anything evil...yup, ok, tchau!