Interesting. Good work.
-AA

it's been a while since i've read things on fp, but i'm glad i read the first. Which means: i'm very impressed, very in awe, very jealous. in short I LOVE STEPH. she's awesome and mega talented to the max

ooh, i remember reading this in music class with yamwam. incredible, wonderful, fantastisch (oh, look, i'm lapsing into german, also like her) and amazing and... i'm running out of adjectives... it's better on here 'cause i can enjoy the syllables more without having people stare at me funny (cough, flutes, trombones, saxes, cough)(hack, trumpets, splutter). i kid because i love! your imagery is... amazing. um, i guess i'll tell you more at SCHOOL today! hahahaha! (crazy veggies unite!) (and eu[honium players unite!) (and... go... unity!) i think this is quite possibly the longest review in the history of reviews, or actually i think it's an e-mail disguised as a review. in any case, love and hugs from a fellow poet in awe!
-jd

Hey, I read this on paper. I still like it. Sehr schoen, sehr interessant, meine heidnische Verfasserin Freundin.