I like it. I've had throughts of the soul my self...

Well written. I can see the effort in this poem clearly. No real advice.

Very good. that is a good job. My name is Raina! is that your real name?

I like it, of course I'm a fan of all your work, but I have a thing for poetry. Didn't know you wrote it as well, but anyway, the only thing I don't see is enough detail. But keep it up.

I like it.