you are good at using words to show what you feel and what images you hold, its very deep.

In "Walking threw the woods" Threw=Through methinx.
lol, but it's awesome anyways!
*P.S:SOAD, Static-X and M.M rock!*
*P.P.S: I thought I was the only one who liked Bram-Stokers original Dracula!*

Again- I THINK I got it... more this time than before. And I like it. It sounds like this is what you strongly believe in... you're really good at showing your emotions.

You have a way with words that draws me to your poetry Mr. Dark Enchanted vamp dude. You are also very morbid. Keep it up.

Amazing.
You write with such pain, such longing..
How hopeful it seems one line, and the next line the hope is dashed to bitter peices.. I can't describe how much I love your style. You can't let your talent get wasted.

Hah, this was excellent!

this is a wonderful poem! i like it a lot. your portrayal is incredible. :o)

that's actually pretty good trav. I enjoyed it...yet you have to learn that "realation" isn't a word...but its okay because I come up with a lot more words than you do...

-C of D

P.S. don't forget to give credit to the person who CAME UP WITH THE NAME FOR THE SONG!

Wow... That was really... I dunno, dark... Not bad, mind, just really really deep, and not talking about happy things, therefore dark. The sort of thing I need to read at least three times before being able to think clearly again.

As far as subject matter goes, this was incredible. At times, though, it *was* a little hard to follow; this due in part to some spelling and grammar errors... You'd probably do well to find a sound beta reader. In at least one place, word choice and order also made it rather confusing.

You have a wonderful degree of raw talent, clearly displayed in this piece. KEEP IT UP! Work on your spelling/grammar, and always get at least one person to pre-read your work so they can point out spots that don't make much sense to others, even if they do to the writer. Looking forward to reading more of your works!

God bless,

~Taylor

I liked this song it was beautifully written and somewhat sad but still very good.

Wow I really like this great job.

and yet another perfect ending. i am shocked and amazed.