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| Damien 2003-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseSad, sweet...Um just watch for a few typ-o spelly things...other than that it kicked **... |
| BlueMnM 2003-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseAww...sad dude, sad! :( In the emotional sort of way of course, not pathetic, coz it's not pathetic at all! It's well-written but there's umm a few typos..just to warn ya..Anyway, good job! :) |
| Xandria Eguor 2003-06-02 ch 1, | abusewow...definatly sumarizes the pain of losing some1! pain even tho u knew it was coming... ~~Xandria~~ |
| Nessa 2003-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseTear Tear, Sniffle Sniffle! That was really sad. Amazing writing though. |
| Ezzara Santo'Caballero 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuse::Tear:: so sad, but it's well written, good job. the only spelling mistakes that jumped out at me were "hled" should be "held" and "remanded" should be remained." But other than that, it looks great! "Follow your heart, follow your pen." ~ Ezz |