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| Lord Jareth 2004-05-20 ch 1,  | abuseDear God... you must forge your own connection with Him, and make Him yours as you are His. Don't listen to the lies of the fools who claim to do His work... they are fools. But you already knew that. |
| Delete Name 2004-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is not inspiring nor hopeful. It's the words of a fallen person. God will not condemn you for what you do or say, as long as you believe in him. Although if you do believe in him, then you should strive to be obedient to him. You should strive to shut out all sins, and anything unnatural (especially those that feel perfectly natural to you, such as lying, or having sex). This poem isn't about coming into the light, it's about shutting out God because he's not what you think he ought to be. 8/10 for the works, although I feel very sad for you. |
| NuMbGrl-15 2004-03-16 ch 1, | abuseI agree 110% to this poem. i find my self saying the same thing alot to people. I liked it! Sam |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-05-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. I'm speechless. This is so brilliant. |
| deathcyth 2003-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour poem really inspired me live my life better |