hey not bad, and funny at the begaining keep it up

I hope you put up a new chapter soon! I wanna read more!

Um... ok you need to just keep writing this like now!

Wow, this is a long break. Almost 3 years... Well, if you don't mind and your not to busy... Please end the cliff hanger...

Please update. This is an interesting story.

Long long long breaks... *ducks for no reason*

Well, it seems I'm going to be spamming you... *cough* ANyway, I do hope you get this up again once you write it, and that you update it soon. ^__^

LONG breaks. lol. just reminding that this story is awesome, nad is in fact, stil there.

Rah. I never read this story, but curiousity got the best of me so I did, sure it isn't one of your best--you know; but the story line is great. ^_^; I do like it, and I want to see more. Oh,and yeah, your writing did improve.

your so mean making me wait to know what happens! oh...well

your story can use some editing. and more description.

I want to know what next. Your is really great. I really love it. PLEASE UPDATE MORE SOON!

WOW! Gr8 story! How di du get 51 reviews?? That is amazing!

i read over the first three chapters and your right theres a great start here! I real ground work for things to come, but i KNOW your a WAY better writer so i can't wait to find out what you do to this story.

u should do whatever with this story then update it cuz its good and i like it.