wow... this was shorter than the other one... the prequel?

well it's only shorter by 8 chapters. though it would have been better if there was something more to Lucian's and Zack's relationship. besides... what does Zack look like?

this whole time, i've been picturing him as Zack from final fantasy... dunno why, but that's just the way my mind works.

i'm pretty sure you didn't give a description of zack in "the life of the gay slayer"... yep, just a background check.

can't wait to read the sequel!! i love your work, it's not based around sex like most stories with vampires and the like. it actually has a plot, though i wished this one had a more developed one like the one before it. but it was good nonetheless.

u don't know how to write non-tangled romance, do you. one person always starts out liking someone, then ending up with someone else in a different story. lmao. this is from having read all the slayer stories just now, and shadow jewel and moon twins. thaz good. add some variety to the usual stuff u find on the net. and i really like how they end up with other people cus it really didn't work, and nobody was being whorish or stupid. incidentally raven(cus he's just adorable) is my fave of all ur characters. then caliarus(damn hot demon that he is).

Nieni: *sobs* All that and no lemon!

Nite:...

Nieni: Kill me now, why don't you??!

Nite: *sighs*

Nieni: But it's not like I have a choice, now that I've been drawn in, I'll have to read the next one!

Nite: *rolls eyes*

Nieni:...

Nite: Done?

Nieni: Yes.

Nite: Ok. We enjoyed the story greatly and we look forward to reading the sequel.

I've been readin this story *claps*
just beautiful, and durriken is so hot *drools slightly* lol

\\Waits impatiently for sequal//

That was rude finishing it there dammit. I was bloody enjoying myself reading it...then you go and finish it. Of all the things to do.

Well, i guess i'll have to wait for the sequal. Hopefully i don't get as confused heh.

Good ending. I liked it. I can't wait for the sequel.

i like it alot, but you really need to cleal somethings up, as to who's who, because i'm a little lost

LD: Well, duh
Karen: Of course we like it! It ended so much better than I thought it would ^_^
LD: And I still love Durriken! So yay for Durriken-centric sequels!
Karen: Yup yup! I love all of the twisty plot turns. This is a great story. . . hell, a great set of stories!
LD: I can't wait to read more ^_^

Well I'll definately be anxiously waiting for the next bit. It is odd that Sha'rel has a son. But I really like your writing, and your characters. Please continue the good work, and quickly.

I read it and I liked it...a lot! Really, I did. Your stories are really interesting, and I must say, they are really sort of developing themselves into a big novel, seeing how one story is connected with another one and so on. Please continue writing! I absolutely loved it!

I didn't realize it was Durriken until he told Salmalin. Were we suppossed to pick up on that? Good chapter.

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oh my frakin gawd...! i really was SURPRISED! he slept with lucian! no! i want him to sleep with durrikin...!aaHA!!

*groans, very, very loudly*
LOL!
whoa that was so amazing, sorry its just now i've started reading the 3rd chapter.*whimpers sadly*

heheheh coolnes, more please? ^.^

sorry, i havent reviewed. But i REALLY liked this one *snickers evily, then blushes*

remember delayed gratification is a horrible thing