Reviews for Eye of the Beholder

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Faithless Juliet 2006-06-25 ch 11,	abuseWonderful.
Faithless Juliet 2006-06-25 ch 16,	abuseI like the historical references within this; the birth of Nero, I can see Agrippina going through this, but also, historically she was just as scheming as her son, if not worse. I liked this though, keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.
wonky donkey 2004-07-26 ch 12,	abuseexcellent word choice. "floundering over steaming asphalt" I've been away too long.
Lieschen 2004-06-21 ch 22,	abuseIt's Lieschen...I got sick of the name. This one made me sad. In a good way, of course.
a e i o u and sometimes y 2004-05-16 ch 8,	abuseOh, I love this poetry collection by you! It's fantastic! I especially love this one :)
Aimee Raven 2004-04-27 ch 8,	abuseHey! Oh I love this! Sorry I'm reviewing chapter 8 out of the blue but I love the cheshire cat, lol. Anyway this is really good! Actually, I want to say that I've read quite a lot of your stuff but you write so much i simply can't review everything but I will try, you are EXTREMELY talented and your imagery is awesome! Fantabulous! Love, Mia
featherlight 2004-02-22 ch 20,	abuseAlmost like a tongue twister, it' so fun to say...but it's also the kind of piece that really makes you think. Great job.
featherlight 2004-02-22 ch 8,	abuseFantastic. Beautiful. Amazing. You have a true talent for writing, and your poems make me remember why poetry is called an art.
godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-12-01 ch 11,	abuseeep!! haiku!! So glad to welcome you to the fold. They're addicting, really, once you get started. And--wow. I'm a bit in awe at the sheer brilliance of this one. First haiku, you say? Either you're lying or I'm very, very jealous. Gotta love those Shakespearean references... ~lyv
godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-12-01 ch 10,	abuse"Fingernails –/ Jagged as mountain peaks,/ Jabbing at her skin…/" I knew right away that this would be different from your usual, but it was different in a good way...it's nice to see that you can deviate and still be brilliant. The imagery is crisp, vivid, and effective, and...yeah. I'll stop trying to be technical. I got a picture of a distraught, too-thin, grieving young woman, scratching bird-like at her hair, her arms, her eyes, picking her clothes like twigs, eyes roaming. And then the title--well that changes things a bit, but I'm still staying with my original image ^^. Sorry it's taken so long to review...oh, and just so you know, I put a piece up in tribute to all of you here who I count friends...care to check it out? ~lyv
godawful teen-angst poetry 2003-11-23 ch 7,	abuseSuch visceral, slamming language here--every image stuck out clearly, sharply, almost to the point of too sharply, in my mind, like a set of negatives developed with the best of equipment, still wet on the proof sheet, wrenching focused evidence of the photographer's--or, in your case, poet's--sheer brilliance. You never cease to amaze me. Every line is perfection. ~lyv
Lieschen 2003-11-19 ch 19,	abuseCold and echoing and stark. The line "gold and pink-blooded assassin" gave a sudden rush of warmth and passion, but I don't know how. This was another fantastic poem - I m off to finish reading what I've missed ! ELise
The Black Rider 2003-11-03 ch 22,	abusejumps Wasn't expecting that. Like all great haikus, it was short and packed with all the emotions in anything else you've ever written. Fantastic.
Jimmy Jazz 2003-11-02 ch 22,	abuseOhohoo! Very good! These are just getting better and better, fantastic work, I love this. Excellent job!
not sure yet 2003-10-29 ch 22,	abusewow, very powerful and muchly enjoyed, especially the middle line, anywayz, excellent job

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