Excellent 'poetic observation' as i call this sort of poem. You capture the scene and emotion masterfully, and display it for the reader with skill.

This is adorable. It sounds weird, but I like that it doesn't rhyme And it reminds me of the boys at my school! Love it.

I like this. Good job.

This flows well. I'm no critic of free verse, but I have at least 2 friends who I'm sure would tell you to break up the lines more so that there were fewer sentences... Ah, well. I like it.

Hmm, I don't often read poems. What can I say, I like to write them, but never read them. This was an amusing subject to write about. I don't think I've ever done one on people playing tennis. But hey, you need your inspiration. This was good... now I have to go check out your other ones. :)

Stephanie