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| Ishtar Johnston 2004-07-19 ch 1,   | Aah I do like this piece! I do feel like I'm in there with you! *blinks* *leaps out* Seriously though, a very pleasant relaxing read. |
| Gamer Lioness 2004-06-24 ch 1, | Ooh, the experiance of reading this is relaxing. I have a jacuzzi in my house; you make me want to use it right now... |
| katmonkey 2004-05-16 ch 1, | Nice desciption and it transports the reader. *lime-girl* |
| NeWriter 2004-05-09 ch 1, | It certainly produces a relaxing feeling. The effect was really good and the choice on words you made belong a lot in this. It's weird, I've never actually read an essay like this! Well, it proves what a mind can do to you - and what words can produce:) |
| Twisted makeral 2004-04-11 ch 1, | Hehehe. You captured that pretty well. Now aslong as you're not a guy I'm happy. |
| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-02-04 ch 1, | (relaxed grin) Yep. Captured it perfectly. I feel all warm and calm. You're a wonderful writer. |
| Simon283 2003-12-23 ch 1, | OH!! wow, SO REAL! i can actuallyu FEEL IT! you should publish a book of poetry and stuff like this (i guess short story/essays). SO GOOD ~S |
| Birdaloo 2003-12-22 ch 1, | astonishing imagery. WOW! im SO blown off of my feet! have you ever thought of publishing a book or short stories or something? this is amazing! |
| Shadow Mindwalker 2003-12-06 ch 1, | I felt it. Great job. |
| Cata Maran 2003-12-01 ch 1, | In your third sentence, I understand that your escape is a book, but maybe you could word it a bit differently as it seems a tad awkward. Whoa...this experience is relaxing even to read! |
| fugiguru 2003-11-16 ch 1, | this was really good. i wish i was in that bath tub. not necessarily with you, i mean, just in a bathtub... |
| SpawnMeister666 2003-09-22 ch 1, | I like it a lot...almost felt like I was in the bathtub with you...in a strictly platonic friendly way of course!! Spawny |
| Aurum Potestas Est 2003-08-23 ch 1, | It's very descriptive and wel done. good Job! |
| Heart O'fire 2003-05-24 ch 1, | I'd say you certainly succeded in allowing the reader to experiance that moment. Great Job! |
| book-lover freak 2003-05-11 ch 1, | This is very descriptive. I liked the way you used your vocabruary. |