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| youpin 2006-12-24 ch 1,   | I love your story. |
| agela 2005-02-16 ch 29, | is this story done? because if it isnt u must hurry and update another chapter its takin a long time! |
| SaintEm0 2004-05-20 ch 27, | wow.. i think that you should make it so that there still angry at one another until THEY both get abducted and then they realise there love for one another... i always thought that was a cool thing.. what do you think |
| lilleo 2004-01-11 ch 27, | is this story finished? it doesnt seem it |
| charmaine 2003-12-15 ch 1, | hey :) this shows a lot of promise. i realise that you've got millions of chapters and sequals following this... but who knows, i might just read all of them and catch up :) you've got me hooked so far. |
| brownbear 2003-12-10 ch 28, | why start a sequel whent the first story hasn't been finished? what happens after the party? why doesn't franklin come back after her? there are so many questions! i just don't think that the way you ended the story was very good because it left too many loose ends. if you tied them up a bit it would be much better. :) b.b |
| brownbear 2003-12-10 ch 23, | that doesn't make sense, tho. i thought they needed her for information, why kill her? it's very suspensful, and i hate homework from taking me away from the computer now. :( oh well, i'll read more later. :) b.b |
| brownbear 2003-12-10 ch 19, | i never liked katrina, but now she's just plain evil!! she takes one look at the guy and poof! she wants him! and he was KISSING her sister! gr on her! this is a good story! very sad and emotional. :) b.b |
| brownbear 2003-12-09 ch 6, | wow! great twist in the story, and it's so sad. hannah and tyler's relationship seems to be moving a little too fast tho, even if it has been a month, you didn't really write about it. there are some grammer mistakes, like indenting paragraphas and not capatilizing last names and putting periods too often, tho you could have been trying to do an elipsis (...) but only got one of the periods. also, you tend to repeat yourself in some points. like the title thingy says, 'nearly 6 years later' then under that you say the same thing. you could get rid of the title, that would make it better. anywho, good chap! :) b.b |
| Jaden Anderson 2003-11-21 ch 28, | WICKED ** STORY! ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! STUPID DIANE! I hate her!! Grr... okay... well... going on to read ff 2!! Your fan and friend ~*Jaden*~ |
| Estelle Stafford 2003-08-03 ch 4, | Oh Tyler is so sweet. I like this. |
| Estelle Stafford 2003-08-03 ch 3, | So Tyler is a hottie. That was good. |
| born to scorn 2003-07-29 ch 7, | Aww that is so sad! I hope they don't move to Florida! I forbid it... jk |
| born to scorn 2003-07-29 ch 2, | Aww I hope that nothing *too* bad happened to Hannah! I can't wait to see Ty and Hannah's relationship in the future |
| sorrowofDeirdre 2003-07-07 ch 1, | Geez, it's long. lol, yeah, I've read some, but, I won't be able to read it all today...and then you have a sequel. Yeah, check you later. @:) |