I like this poem. I found your page and was like "Wow, I know this person!" I going to start reading your poems... I didn't know you were over here! Good poem. I think that alot of people feel like that sometimes. Strength, I think, is shown when people decide to live through the trials and tribulations that could pull other people down. Two thumbs way up!

spellcheck. spellcheck. spellcheck. also, maybe try out some details to give your lament a bit more weight, more reality. right now it seems as fake as a plastic christmas tree.