 Azaelia Hamwich 2004-04-16 . chapter 1Sounds like the story of me and my 'friends', now I know I'm not alone! Very good, it ... works, I don't really know what to say it is very good! (Good title too! That's what attracted me to it :D)
Just a typo (which I thought you might like to change so people don't have to stop the flow of thinking/reading!) Um, third line down (in first verse) should it be '..through thiCk and thin'? (not '..thiNk and thin')
I understand how you don't notice things like that, I think it's cos you know what you wanted to say so that's how you read it sort of thing :D
Anyhoo, well done (again!)
Slainte! :) (elvish for congratulations for peeps who dont know!) |
 tricklingdust 2003-07-30 . chapter 1This is an excellent poem, and I can really relate. You probably don't want to hear ALL of my stories, but one of those "forever" friendships of mine lasted three years, and the other one.. oh, three months. XD I'm pathetic, I know. ^^ Great great great great poem. ^^ Kudos to you! |
 Eva R. L. Hughes 2003-05-13 . chapter 1This is good. For the record, i'm going through a fight with someone who was my friend and this is really making me think. |
 Homicidal Teddy Bear 2003-05-13 . chapter 1I really like this for the simple fact it expresses EXACTLY what I'm feeling right now. |
 K. Evenstar 2003-05-11 . chapter 1This hit a nerve - I think we can all sympathise with it if we've ever been betrayed by friends |
 Weesil 2003-05-10 . chapter 1Wow...this is going on my favorites! It seems everyone's going through the same thing at one time... |