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| DevilsSinGodsDie 2004-03-31 ch 1,   | not one of your best but still very good you should keep writing and finish what you start.. i/j/k |
| Tiadaria 2003-09-26 ch 1, | I liked this poem...though, personally, I would have only used single-not double-question marks. But hey, all writers are different...and the poem was still good. ^_^ ~Lucky~ |
| scjerb12 2003-09-20 ch 1, | This is a wonderful poem that I can relate to a lot. "pure accident" i like that...sorry |
| Princess Chloe 2003-07-23 ch 1, | This scares me and intrigues me at the same time, because I think about this subject too. A lot. (HOW CAN YOU BE SO GOOD AT POETRY?) Poems are a really good way to vent your feelings. ~Chloe |
| Modern Poet 2003-06-29 ch 1, | nice thought. |
| JadedSecrets 2003-06-17 ch 1, | This one made me think, how will we go out? I wanna go in my sleep, painless. Luved it! *Jade* |
| kamikaze899 2003-06-08 ch 1, | curious thoughts.. well written! |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2003-06-08 ch 1, | Death is something that most just don't overcome. Just think of it this way, you stab me everyday, lol. The pain, the torment, the horror. Just think of death as funny, just like "The end of Gramps?" Story we wrote in art, now that was a funny death, hehehehe |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2003-05-26 ch 1, | :S death... so ... dead... *lost for words* very impactful! |
| Bela Lugosi 2003-05-10 ch 1, | very typical. try to be a little more creative. |