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| bluedrop 2005-07-24 ch 1,   | omg that is so sad *wipes tear* |
| Miki Watanabe 2004-01-26 ch 1, | Great poem. It kills that this is such a common family situation anymore. Tell your dad you want to see him more often. If you don't want to hurt him, try to let the anger sleep for awhile, and just say that you two should hang out. Tell him more with time. Let him know you miss him - few fathers can stand to watch their daughters hurting. |
| Princess Chloe 2003-07-23 ch 1, | OMG. Are your parents separated? This sounds like you live what this poem talks about. That's why I like your poems. ^_^ ~Chloe |
| JackMcMichael(AKA hopeless 2003-06-23 ch 1, | This is kinda sad... but it's good... but, you SHOULD try writing a story... let everyone ELSE tell you. BTW, chapter 2 of A HOme To Run To is up!! |
| LaTiNa-CiNnA 2003-06-20 ch 1, | Yes! I had time to read one of your poems! Thanks for reviewing mine by the way ^-^ Gosh, your poem really made me sad... my dad is kinda like that and the sad thing is we live in the same house... |
| JadedSecrets 2003-06-16 ch 1, | WOW, that is almost exactly like my dad! except he only visits on my newest, and first younger, sister's birthday and a holiday that isnt Christmas, he lives about 20 miniutes from me and I also cant drive, but his probablem isnt work, its siply cuz he has to fit into his schedual the 2 most important things, 1: time with his new family and 2:parties, he told me with I think was real **! Well, G2G- *J* |
| Lost Soldier REVAMPED 2003-06-08 ch 1, | Caity, some people can be so cold, but maybe it is not all your fathers fault, just try to think of the positives in your life, but you are right, he should come to see you, but don't make that the only downfall of your life, thing will soon all go away, I believe that |
| starangel100890 2003-06-03 ch 1, | powerful really, I like this I hope you will read my new one I will post in family it's called drifting away. that's all for now oh and thank you for reviewing. |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2003-05-26 ch 1, | that's so sad! wow! i can see why it would break his heart... but its brekaing you too. you should come before him, he should be there for you! :O oh my my my... i hope things work out for you the way you want... |
| Isay 2003-05-19 ch 1, | That's such a sad poem... *sniffles* ~Isay |
| Whisper to the Water 2003-05-18 ch 1, | Reminds me of Sylvia Plath's "Daddy". At least, I think it was Plath...maybe Virgina Woolf. D'arrgh! *hates uncertainty* |
| TylerB 2003-05-14 ch 1, | its really sad but i like it. maybe a little more rhyming would make it all flow together a little better though |
| S. R. Devaste 2003-05-10 ch 1, | Very sad...but things like that happen way to often. |