really enjoyed reading this story. :) very cute.
i thought some of it was kind of rushed, but it came together nicely ^^

Oh my god.
Sano does the most embarressing things sometimes!
Love the story =D

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I thought this story was just wonderful. I think you have a great way with writing. I couldn't put the story away before I finished it. It is one of my favourites on this site.I am so glad it turned out so good...I am so happy that they were able to adopt her. You wrote actually believable characters and touched sensitive subjects with good taste. Thanks for sharing this story, I have added to my favourite list.

hello! i started reading this and when i got to the part about Sano's friend, Kat. "Kat's like uber-polite, you know, take-home-to-meet-your-parents type polite. And she has the most sweet, innocent nature. You'd never guess she was secretly a bloody sadistic **." i read that and i thought of myself! it was really cool an do you know me? and when i read about how Lila looks and i thought of one of my friends! except she's not goth and i don't THINK she's a lesbian. oh, and she's not a Puritan. she's a Morman. but exact same description otherwise! it's actually kinda creepy...love the story! got to go now! bye!

*sniffs* i loved your story it was awsome!!

hey! this is deadlypinkpuchu (not like u know who that is but eh)... too lazy to sign in but yes!

OMFG! This has got to be one of the most awesomest slash dramas i have read! I mean damn, this had anything you would ever need in a drama! And damn it was written so friggin well!! I am blown by how ** awesome it really was!

Oh wow!

That was so awsome.

I got a little irked at some things but it was still an awsome storie.

i cried so much,ive never cried like this from an ONLINE fiction before. i got home from babysitting at 3 in the morning and im just now finishing it at... 8:o5 i hope your happy i didnt get any sleep AT ALL cause your so damned good. on a serious note that was awesome, thank you, and im gonna go pass out now.

omfg! i love you! thats one helluva good story!! eep!! if i ever get an account here its going on my favorites list!! wow... i feel so very happy for sano and jasper! and all the happy sappiness has got me hyper! ima gonna read ur other stories now...

*cries* It was so good! I think it was sweet and cute. Your grammar and form were perfect. I saw practically no errors. I loved it!

I mean, It made me cry! I was so happy, and then there was conflict, and then I was solved, so I was happy again! This totally going on my favorites.

Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.

Buggeration...I really dont know what to say, but for what is worth, Ill give you what ive got. And to be honest, this is the MOST honset review I have given in all my years.
Im not really a fan of yaoi/slash whatever you call it, but by no means i am not a homophobe.Neither am i gay, really. I do like to think i take an interest in yaoi more than one would expact a straight boy to do. I put this on my addiction to anime and the acceptance i get to these kinds of things when i become open-minded from exposure to it.
More honestly, i can say that whenever i see slash or yaoi in a summary, i simply click on. But when i saw this fic, however, it was different. Very different. It drew me in; the title, you know. I didnt find out there was homosexuality in it until halfway down the first chapter. I didnt click on though, i didnt even think bout it. I was taken. The substance, the frighteningly real and HUMAN characters...it got to me.I began reading a months ago, and am finishing it now. Not because im a slow reader, no. I would usually finish one of these in a single sitting. But your writing is...concntrated. You have the amazing ability to put a whole manga's worth of substance, an entire season of content; into a single chapter. I felt I was overdosing on drama.
Although I dont totally relate to sanosuke, as I dint have as bade shite as he did for parents, it was strange to me how I could relate-just a bit- at least to ALL of them. Their not perfect, no, their in fact not perfect even in being not perfect. Sorry, this is a bit hard to explain.
Um, usually there are pre-decided roles, the rape victim, the lifeless statue, blah blah.. that everybody's seen on the telly or read, and they all act a bit the same. YOUR characters dont fit that. Sasuke being a near-rape victim, but not playing the part how you would see a usual near-rape victim would as in tv or whatnot. It AMAZED me. The romance, the thought process of every character, totally unique and thought out. The use of the internet spam INGENIOUS. By the end of the 8th chapter, I felt my brain was going to burn out. All the thoughts and exitement was reacing about my brain and many times I had to shut my laptop and have a sit simply to give time to let it all sink in. All I could think was "This is a mad mess, a big gay soap opera-circus, and its moving to bloody quick!"
The drama, the plot twists, the endless branches...i knew this could have turned into a 100-chapter epic. However, just sticking to the main plotline was already a GREAT epic.
I have much more to say, but my brain is so crowded i cant get it out. This story is just TOO good. Its so good its not right. This is NOT a short story, this is the cold-script to a world-class movie, a film-festival dominator. This is the overview of a bestselling manga mini-series. Best way i can put it now, mate.
Im not a big fan of slash. Im not a fan of slash at all. In fact if you would of asked me how much yaoi i like, i would hve told you '**-all' But his fic has changed me. More than any fic ever has. i know i might sound a bit over-the-top, but my second sentence stands true.
My most favorite piece of writing.EVER.
I started reading this story in an underground internet cafe in an alley in Rome. I finish it now on a couch in Memphis. 2 months, one story. One, possibly more, lives changed.
Rock on till' the end of time.-ST //.-

This story is very entertaining. Although it's ten o'clock in the morning and I haven't had any sleep since five last afternoon (insomniac I have), I will continue reading.
"If you win getting through the Shoikon Grove, I will give you a toad flavored lollipop, so you can lick the toad, without actually licking the toad!"

This was a wonderful story! *loved it* It was well written and I liked the first person perspective *nodnod* I'm glad that they (Sano especially) found some degree of happiness.

Squigles. Gorgeous fic. Very incredibly useless review but it's so different to anything I've read. Usually I mean that as story wise but the whole thing's unique - the way you told it, the .. I don't know. It's just so suprisingly different that I'm having problems pinpointing it. One point is that it seemed a little perfect but didn't detract. J'adore.