I find this quite amusing.. You've caught my attention. I can't wait for more! Is this based on something you feel/have gone through? I love the way it's building... Please tell me you have more coming...

Aurora Barrett

This was actually quite entertaining! I really like this. If you developed your characters and continued the story, I think it would make an awesome series.

Favourite line? Very well, then!

"Small mean yellow eyes shown in the darkness, intent on the movie of the week..."

That made me laugh out loud!

Sterling work! May you always have fresh ideas for stories!

Very special story. Are you going to continue? I think that the two college girls are pretty typical, considering there's a mythical creature sitting in their dorm. I hope you go on with this, if that was your intent.

This is funny, an I would probably read a second chapter. I'm presuming that Ashlee is an annoying sister?

The Leopard