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| Bluestreamer 2005-07-13 ch 1,   | Silo, is her female panther. remember the prologue and where it says she has the power to speak with anything. well thats how she talks with Silo. |
| high on heartbreak 2003-06-13 ch 1, | I like it. It sounds as if time wasted love away, which happened to me a little while ago. I wouldn't flame this at all, I think it's aptly explained. |
| Frodo 2003-05-22 ch 1, | I really liked how you described love by fire... a small red ember that hasn't been quenched. Nice work. I really enjoyed this. -Frodo p.s. The X-Men old cartoons are the best cartoons ever made. Batman is cool too. Simpsons are just laugh out loud hillarium. (And we all know how much Lord of the Rings rocks! lol) Oh yeah, the original trilogy of Stars Wars is the best. What has Lucas done now? He's lost his edge... ok, sorry, I just felt like telling you that I agree on a lot of your favorites things... okey dokey. Adios. |
| Neveada Sierriana 2003-05-15 ch 1, | This is very good. I can tell that whoever this is you care about a great deal. Nice way to describe your emotions. I can see why this poem is important to you. You have a great talent. |
| x-FLaMeZ-x 2003-05-11 ch 1, | great poem...expresses a lot of feeling and emotion towards the reader |