Reviews for The Long Forgotten Princess

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BlueSaviour15 2006-08-30 ch 16,	DAMN! I love this story. I like how you gave it your own special twist and didn't stick the boring old fairy tale. However, I'm confused about something. In the first few chapters, Grimm goes on about not wanting to write a story with hard, cold facts to children and puts away. You know, this doesn't seem so bad for something that's supposed to be real and confrontational about life. Oh, well. You're doing a good job. Just watch your paragraphs and your spacing. Sometimes you'd start a new paragraph with somebody's quote and then at the end of the last one there'd be a phrase like "She gasped out in fright!". It gets confusing. Just a suggestion =) Love,BlueSaviour15
cryingelf 2006-06-18 ch 15,	nice story so far. Although you have not mentioned the fainting spells and side-effect of the skin potion! keep updating
Adelphia Montague 2004-04-13 ch 15,	Very good, Bravo. I enjoyed reading this story, it has a good plot. The details of the court were a little sketchy, I didn't quite believe he was King of France for some reason. I don't think that royalty would have had that much freedom to go anywhere without anyone knowing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep on writing
tesuka- chan 2003-11-25 ch 14,	Hallo Rosa! 'Tis been a long time since I reviewed your fic... though it looks like its on hiatus. ;p So.. that Thierry guy along with the six other dwarfs are like the "seven dwarfs"? Very interesting! I like the way you didn't stick to the traditional story. ^_^ I wonder what's going to happen next... :D Well, keep it up! I'll check it now and then (God knows, we don't have time for writing anymore ;p). Keep it up! ja! ^_^
Lemon Drop 2003-07-05 ch 14,	MORE MORE MORE!
tesuka- chan 2003-07-02 ch 13,	KYUL! Thierry, eh? I seem to remember a "Thierry" in the night world series. think think Oh well. shrugs at least that's another hot bishounen on the list. grins Kya! Green eyes! I'm melting! melts into a puddle on the floor Anyway, what a bad time to haver her menstruation! LOL Trust you to put something like that in the story! BWAHAHAHA! Well, it is part of life, after all. One just has to accept it. grins Soo... the servant's the dwarf? NICE twist. I'll bet she's planning something evil towards Chantelle. Poor girl, she keeps having death threats from everyone. tsk tsk tsk. ;p Good luck to her. Well, short, yet concise chapter. Keep it up, Rosa! ^_^ see ya in school! ^_^
tesuka- chan 2003-07-02 ch 12,	O.O WOW. Nice poem! stares agog at the screen Haha... no wonder you you're going b\pulbished! ^_^ This is great! Totally loved the difficult- to -understand- words- that- you- probably- got- somewhere. heeheehee... No, sriously... it a great poem! You should be awriter! (minnie me: baka! She IS a writer!) Er, yeah. sweatdrop well, i'll read the next chappi now. ;p
Alexiana 2003-06-23 ch 2,	I haven't read a good story on here in the longest time, so I'm very happy I found this one. it's started off great, really pulls you in. Anyway, I've got to go to work right now, but you'd better believe that I'll be back to continue reading this...
Lemon Drop 2003-06-18 ch 12,	MORE MORE MORE!
passion101 2003-06-16 ch 12,	wow, this story is quite twisted and very very interesting. I would like to see how jacques pulls this off
Lemon Drop 2003-06-03 ch 11,	Brilliant...continue
tesuka- chan 2003-06-02 ch 11,	very mawkish indeed. grins I'm afraid you already mentioned it yourself. ;p Anyway, i recognized his "tactic" from the rurouni kenshin series when Yahiko fought some goons (methinks I watch too much rk. sweatdrop). Well, this chapter reminds me of that French movie, Brotherhood of the Wolf. Uber nice movie... full of action. ;p Nice chapter! Well? tap tap So what happened to little snow white... er... Chantelle? Gah. humph. I'll wait for it. glares waves a little French flag Go Jacques, go! laterz! ^_^
tesuka- chan 2003-05-28 ch 10,	hallo Rosa! ^_^ grins you are one devilish little author! I kept imagining you writing this and i couldn't help but laugh... heeheehee... it's just so you! ;p Anyway, i bet you did a LOT of research for this... i'm quite amazed at the loads of information that's in this story of yours... of course, it wouldn't be historical without that! Good job! Keeps me interested. ^_^ Hehehe... all that cheeziness from Meteor Garden is stuck in your brain, my friend. I have nothing against it,m believe me, but i do tend to cringe at some cheesy lines. But all is well, and I'm so proud of you and your story! Well, I gotta go and read the other one. evil maniacal lauighter toodles! ^_^
Euphraxia 2003-05-26 ch 10,	oh fun! I didn't know cooks could tell the difference from one animal heart to another. Don't they all look the same?
Sheri 2003-05-23 ch 8,	Jacques isn't going to go back to Chantelle?? That's so sad! But this is a great story.

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