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| slightlyaddictedx3 2008-07-14 ch 45,  | abuselovin` your story =] |
| Elle Winters 9 2008-07-04 ch 46, | abusewow.. that's swet, i really liked the ending.. the epilogue was ok.. it'd probably work beter without because it sounds a little forced and doesn't fit with this story. however, the epilogue itself is nicely written and could probably pose a a little short story. |
| Mikari Maki Chen 2008-06-19 ch 45, | abusei personally loved that last chapter you added... so cool... xD this was such a good fanfic! keep up the good work! |
| miiniie 2008-03-28 ch 45, | abuseO.O thats was so cute... not really what I was expecting but it was cute none the less :D excellent epilogue *applaudes* |
| miiniie 2008-03-28 ch 44, | abuseOk I have just finished your story after kicking my siblings off the computer for few days now! :D I would just have to say... WOW! That was one of the best stories I have read! Being totally honest here! I have read a lot of stories... (not really in fictionpress) and yours was just WOW! The characters, the plot, even the summary was excellent! When I checked how many chapters there were I thought it would take me weeks to read but because of your talent and quality of your work I have managed to finish it only a few days! Anyway just wanted to say you're story rocks and in it goes to my favourites! :D |
| LethargicLove 2008-03-22 ch 44, | abuseThis chapter isn't showing up for me. I'm extremely upset since it IS the conclusion. Fortunately, I had already read this story and loved it and was just re-reading it for kicks. If there is any way to fix it, I'd really appreciate it. |
| x3life 2008-02-15 ch 45, | abuseaw this story was so cute!! i loved it =) i totally wanted lee to end up liking evelyn too or something and make a big huge love triangle mess. But i guess both of their egos got in the way of admiting to each other that they liked each other which made a big enough meess in itself. yay. well anywayss loved the storyy... |
| Boo 2007-12-27 ch 45, anon. | abuseI liked the story very much, in fact i spent half of the night reading it=)) I was laughing like crazy at some moments and thanks God the story was not utterly angsty. oh, and speaking about the epilogue...you can't even imagine how much i liked this kindergarden idea. and the ending left me with no words - it is just THAT sweet. because we all still hope that true love exists and I am thrilled about the idea of being the halves of one united whole. and destiny idea. that some people are meant to be together). I'll quote the last lines of your story. it is so great, and I'm happy!=) good luck to you, you're a great author=) |
| Cupcake 2007-12-03 ch 45, anon. | abusehi me again, i just realised something. u should so chnage your epilogue to a pro logue and then the epilogue could be them sitting on the beach together and then he could remember something. and say i told you i would find you. or something sweet like that. you could still use my previous idea which i have partially forgotten lol. but have them talking and then he asks a que to clarify after she has told him about her memory and then all he has to do is smile down at her and say "i told you i'd find you" and then she realises it was him who she was talking bout. isnt that sweet? that way you ahve two extra chappies instead of one and i garenttee your readings will love the twist. well i suppose it is a twist lol. bye again sorry for bugging uou if i am. oh and sos for my bad typing. ciao |
| Cupcake 2007-12-03 ch 46, anon. | abusehi there, i just finsihed your story and i loved it but i really think there is something missing. i thought the epilogue was fantastic, it was something new and exciting. but the only thing that i think is missing is the fact that evelyn and anthony dont remember. i think you should have a paragraph at the end where anthony and evelyn are talking and the kindergarten scenario comes into play. perhaps evelyn could be laughing about a memory she has and then she tells anthony that once she met a boy (whose name she cant memba) who pomised he would marry her. that he would find her again. and then realisation hits anthony and he asks a question to confirm his suspicions. u dont need to write another epilogue just extend the one you have. please? i would love to see them realise they were meant to be. also the french phrase that he said in the last chapter, i dont speak french and i wanted to clarify does it mean "i love you?" cos ive read anotehr story that said i love you in french an im sure it wasnt that phrase. please email me some time and i would really appreciate that small add on at the end of your epilogue. the story was fantastic. thank you for a great read. |
| charm en route 2007-11-10 ch 44, | abuseHonestly, I must say you did a wonderful job in writing this, but I'm sure you've already been told this a million times. [: However, your dragging out of the end almost killed me. Anyway. Congrats on finishing a great story. |
| Enaid 2007-10-25 ch 45, | abusethe last part was def my fave of the whole story. not a disappointment at all. its so sweet that they did end up together. ^-^ |
| Enaid 2007-10-24 ch 24, | abuseWHOSE LINE |
| Enaid 2007-10-24 ch 10, | abuseheehee a cindarella like exit. the whole identical twins thing could make this story a very interesting twist. we shall see. |
| Enaid 2007-10-24 ch 3, | abusehaha he deserved it. the brainless jerk. eve is sveet oh and i think she will need a new pocket dictionary or another fun weapon. vel off i go to read more |