very cool story.

disturbing... you have a knack for writing, i like your almost semi-poetic prose style. flows oh so beautifully.

i like the title. you have an excellent grasp of human emotion and my god, do i sound like a teacher or what. i'll stop now, but rest assured i love this piece.

-jd

“it makes me look pretty.” lmfao!

disturbing. twisted. i like it;)

esp the last bit.

i'm so gald you're barve enough to publish your homicidal tendencies, cause i enjoy reading about them:)

-Travis.

Not bad. Yay! Could be better. Too repetitive in some areas and ideas forget it forget it I'll write it at home.