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| NailsOfNineInches 2003-06-27 ch 1,   | Excellent work! I really enjoyed reading your poem. Keep up the good work. Oh, and thank you much for the review on "Why Not?". Yours is the first review so far. Anyways, quit saying that your poems suck; as long as they get across to people the feelings you have about life, than they're top-notch pieces of work. What you've written are top-notch pieces of work. :) |
| kissing suicide 2003-05-24 ch 1, | this is none the less, an absolutely wonderful poem with an awesome form to it, but i beleive you should make the poetry more yours, not based off of someone elses work. you have talent, use it your fullest and you won't need inspiration from other artists. |
| IrishPikey 2003-05-13 ch 1, | **. This is quite possibly the best thing you've ever written. The transitions are so smooth, the beats are impossibly easy, the rhymes perfect, everything is just amazing. I love it so much...It reflects so much on who you are. You just pour so much of yourself into your work, bring it to life, and that's what matters. You're work is real and alive, and amazing. |
| nimue webweaver 2003-05-12 ch 1, | wow. this is perfect, your emotions show through, the words flow together and yeah, just wonderful, amazing... wow... |