Nice. Very nice. I like the format a lot.

I saw this before but didn't read it.

But I'm glad I read it this time!

Nice job. Hope everything else you write is as good as this and your essay (I still love that!)... Bye.

*Alise

wow! Thats good. I like how you did the poems. Like the way you had the second woman find the ring the first woman took off. Thats great! d_d Two thumbs up!

A change of pace but very good! I wish that I could write that good. Consider yourself one of my favorite authors!

Sad! I loved it but t'was very sad!

Wow! That was so good!

I love this. It kind of reminds me of something, but I don't remember what now. But anyway, very touching.

Also, thankie for reviewing my work _

personally, i prefer the first poem. it's so bittersweet... i swear i have never felt so sorry for a character in a poem my whole life. this second one isn't bad, though. it shows that there are some blissful unions out there. it's also nicely written.

keep writing!

this is so sad and sweet... i can't believe how good a writer you are. i love your other poem too, the one about the dawn. i love how this bittrsweet romantic poem contains sorrow and hope, not just romance and a hint of anger... write on!

A beautiful pair of poems. The conflicting emotions of the couples, sitting at the same table, ws shockingly beautiful, I loved these.

Lyria

Wow grabe! Filipina ka rin! Ang galing galing! _ I'm definitely putting you on my faves list...

Anong school ka galing? I'm from Philippine Science High School... _

You know, ang deep nung poem mo... It's so emotional! *sniff*

I love the format rin...

Sige bye-bye! Just email me or something...

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Isay

what a romantic poem, wish i could as good as you... nice work. keep writing and i'll read it

That was really great! I know exactly how that feels. Keep on writing!

yeah your poem woz awesome too! you really rock! thanx for reviewing my stuff too

Awesome.

You created a great picture.

I really liked it.

Cheers!

wow thats a little sad but really good