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| Unfinished Author 2003-06-18 ch 1, | abusewow, that was deep, very moving. It's a great plot line, very different. well done. |
| Mackenzie Anderson 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI have a close friend who is schitzophrenic... Thank you for the insight. Beautifully written. |
| Shadafakup 2003-05-19 ch 1, | abuseOh wow man.. This has such strong emotions captured in it.. I loved it honestly.. Its really good.. The voices and the repetition of the 'them' added to the freakyness of the story.. It is a fantastic piece.. |
| RNL 2003-05-12 ch 1, | abusePowerful. Very powerful. I'm amazed. This is so well expressed. RNL |