wow, that was deep, very moving. It's a great plot line, very different. well done.

I have a close friend who is schitzophrenic... Thank you for the insight. Beautifully written.

Oh wow man.. This has such strong emotions captured in it.. I loved it honestly.. Its really good.. The voices and the repetition of the 'them' added to the freakyness of the story.. It is a fantastic piece..

Powerful. Very powerful. I'm amazed. This is so well expressed.

RNL