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| Calvin Wong 2004-07-19 ch 1,   | 'And Noah, shush!' I don't have much to say about this story. I want to, but there isn't. When it stops becoming a work in progress, maybe. (chains you to your laptop) Write! |
| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-02-04 ch 1, | This actually works well as a stand-alone, without being discontinued. We get the idea, anyway. Not bad. |
| Aimee Raven 2003-11-21 ch 1, | Hey, oh I think you should finish this...seriosuly its good, very deep..meaningful..the grls point of view and all..and the skepticism..the maths thing makes me laugh cos u no i'm failing for sure, lol. and for crying and worries its TEA! Love, Mia |
| katmonkey 2003-10-18 ch 1, | I'm liking it so far. Are you going to update it? It seems like it just stops and hasn't really got a complete ending to it. Anyway, it's really good! *lime-girl* |
| phoenixa-mechanique 2003-10-10 ch 1, | I think it's unfinished? But it kept me interested so this piece has potential. |
| CJ Jazzy 2003-09-14 ch 1, | Nice story, I like the character Sharissa she seems like someone who has a lot of potential but usually hides. I dont know, that's what i think. Well anyways, i liked the way Sharissa wrote the composition, very unique in my opinion. Good story! |
| tiger lily8 2003-05-23 ch 1, | A bit abrupt. Hm...interesting. |
| sorcha 2003-05-22 ch 1, | no offense its boring and wassup with embarresing ure bf like that i pity the dude noah is it. you should probably consider ure writing carreer. sry but i guess you just dont have that pulling thing |