Reviews for I Believe That - FictionPress.com

Hershey249 2005-09-04 ch 1,	I apologize for my other review that got highly truncated by the ^$%^&ing website, I had something much more intelligent and praising and it got eaten. Anywho, I really love this, how you kept the same two rhymes throughout the entire thing, and how that connects with the idea of repeating doctrines in faiths, how so many have similar cores. It's a simple poem, but in such a powerful way. I agree completely..."Someone" didn't create us just so we could hate and die.
janet84 2003-09-29 ch 1,	:-) I feel the same way. I wish that this poem was longer though... it's such a huge issue and your treatment of it was wonderful, though I wish it was more complete. ~Please read and review my works (and thanks for reviewing mine - for awhile, I wasn't getting reviewer alerts so I didn't know. Sorry!) :-)~
st. maverick 2003-06-11 ch 1,	Very nice poem. Hopeful, in a regretful, lament sort of way. I like the tone and the rhyming is well-done. Good job.
Werecat99 2003-05-14 ch 1,	That was very beautiful, and very, very true. I really liked of how you have avoided naming this 'Someone'. And I totally aprove. I wrote a similar piece once, "End of Days". But mine is darker, and I really like the subtle optimism of your poem. Good work.