|Reviews for Comments|
| CoolBeans18s 2/10/04 . chapter 6
This is great! I really liked it!
| CoolBeans18s 2/10/04 . chapter 5
Awesome form! This piece is amazing! I love the feeling it creates!
| The Zaniak 1/17/04 . chapter 6
The last three I didn't like particularly either, but the finger one I loved. Whaddya know?
| The Zaniak 1/17/04 . chapter 3
Well, I enjoyed this haiku, but I found the other two fairly uninteresting.
| Miz E. Mak 9/29/03 . chapter 6
o! cool. I really like this! I don't know why you are trying to play it off as not one of your best ones. I think it rocks.
| Keep it 100 9/26/03 . chapter 6
Heart of the Sword
| Magpie Poet 9/25/03 . chapter 2
agreed. and more common than the flu.
we need a vaccine against hate? or herd immunity...
(don't mind me)
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 6
I don't know. I think this is quite a good haiku.
Keep writing. I like your work in this collection.
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 5
lol. yes, modify. ;) don't see why not...
Very cool haiku though. I like the image it creates.
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 4
very true. What's that saying? "Still waters run deep" or something like that. People are hardly ever what they seem like on the outside. There's always that inside part that's hidden from the rest of the world.
I really like this haiku. Keep up the good work! And keep writing.
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 3
its okay to not always get the syllables right. :)
Anyways, great haiku!
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 2
ah, awesome work. I like this alot. And I agree, hatred is horrible.
| Children of the Root 9/25/03 . chapter 1
good question. I wonder the same. Good Haiku!
| Lux's Confusion 7/11/03 . chapter 5
having read all of them so far i have to tell you, your grasp of how things truely appear to you is amazing. wow. lovely work...
| Keep it 100 6/26/03 . chapter 5
This really described dreams because it was so surreal. Great work.
...and a new form is born. It's name is: Modified Tanka.
Heart of the Sword