Reviews for Superficial
Magpie Poet 7/24/03 . chapter 1
*applauds*
ittybittytreefrog 7/24/03 . chapter 1
Very good poem. It's very true, too. Your use of metaphors is amazing. Enough said.
Keep it 100 5/12/03 . chapter 1
I liked that you used a mirror to present this.

Heart of the Sword