oh wow


*speechless*




*still completely utterly truly speechless*



WOW, this is amazing! It's so deep, and at the same time so simple! Def going on my fav list! Such a brilliant idea, oh i'm so jealous! Stars vs clouds, extreamly creative!! I love the wondering "if in heart we will stay near", ouch! The rhyming was wonderful, it wasn't overdone, which is nice. I've seen it used where it takes away from the poem, but this doesn't at all. WOW Oh, this is just marvelous. Hats off to you on this fantastic poem!

~ winter

The endin is good.. Beautiful piece.. Nice imagery used here.. I loved the descriptions.. Its extremely well done and absolutely beautiful.. Aw... Anyway its great man.. The parellels used here are very suitable and the whole poem flows very well.. Enjoyable.. Well expressed piece.. Good job!

(Sarah, who is rendered speechless, sits in amazement over such a well written poem) That was excellent, Eladriewen. I hope I'm a star too. I would say you are one...I think you're one of the best poets on this site. Keep up the great work...(Sarah walks off to reread the poem)