Heyellow! Opal Imp here. To Thomasina Aquina1, outrageious ripoff it was. However, don't blame me quite yet with unoriginality. Take a look at my story, "Life Over the Edge." It's not finished and you might not like it, but it's definitely original.

Yes, it was an outrageous ripoff, I'd like to see you make the story your own a little more, but you did have an extraordinary grasp of imagery that I find refreshing on this site. Your focal point of the chess clock did just the trick. Your voice is very good as well as your attention to words. In short, I can tell that you're a good writer, but I'd like to see a story that is more your own (or at least made your own).

Nice story, short and intersting. I wish i could write like this.

Very good..I really like this GREAT WORK! Please reveiw/read some of my work.