Very good poem. I loved the rhyming scheme. The last line was funny.

This one has the ring of a song to it ... I love some of the imagery you've used - 'wobbling in stileto heels'. This has a silent sort of rhythm to it.

Dude, I don't understand why you've put up with this person flaming, or why you've kept their stupid reviews (?) if they can even be described as such.

Keep writing!

wow, kewl poetry! I really liked it!

OHH QUEECH QUON FT! see i CAN make hamster sounds. NOW I CAN GET MY OWN ROLLER COASTER! This story is a little too lenghty but it still made laugh. I even picked my nose at the end! And that's a accomplishment! Great Job! I'd give it a 9.7 on the Richter Scale...outta 36724828. You need to write some more stories! You only have like 2! Even though I hate them, others may like them. Great Flopping Flapjacks! I just hit my knee!OH THE WAFFLE SPEAKS!OH SPEAK AGAIN BEIGHT ANGEL!YOU BRIGHTEN MY DAY WHICH HAS BEEN SADDENED BY THIS TERRIBLE STORY!I LOVE YOU!AHZAH!

Great poem! loved it.

"I am that slowly lifting glowing

Spirit flying oh so high

Shower down those tears I cried

Lift my soul up to the sky."

very cool! and I liked the ending, the whole meaning of it!

cio, hoellenwauwau