|Reviews for I am, and I am not|
| ittybittytreefrog 7/24/03 . chapter 1
Very good poem. I loved the rhyming scheme. The last line was funny.
| aleppine 5/20/03 . chapter 1
This one has the ring of a song to it ... I love some of the imagery you've used - 'wobbling in stileto heels'. This has a silent sort of rhythm to it.
Dude, I don't understand why you've put up with this person flaming, or why you've kept their stupid reviews (?) if they can even be described as such.
| Natalie Portman 5/14/03 . chapter 1
wow, kewl poetry! I really liked it!
| Gemtog4319 5/13/03 . chapter 1
OHH QUEECH QUON FT! see i CAN make hamster sounds. NOW I CAN GET MY OWN ROLLER COASTER! This story is a little too lenghty but it still made laugh. I even picked my nose at the end! And that's a accomplishment! Great Job! I'd give it a 9.7 on the Richter Scale...outta 36724828. You need to write some more stories! You only have like 2! Even though I hate them, others may like them. Great Flopping Flapjacks! I just hit my knee!OH THE WAFFLE SPEAKS!OH SPEAK AGAIN BEIGHT ANGEL!YOU BRIGHTEN MY DAY WHICH HAS BEEN SADDENED BY THIS TERRIBLE STORY!I LOVE YOU!AHZAH!
| hoellenwauwau 5/13/03 . chapter 1
Great poem! loved it.
"I am that slowly lifting glowing
Spirit flying oh so high
Shower down those tears I cried
Lift my soul up to the sky."
very cool! and I liked the ending, the whole meaning of it!