Reviews for Revengeful Silence

Reviews For: Revengeful Silence

Alexander 2003-10-09 ch 6,	Pain is irrelevant. In the end it returns to baseline. Your style lacks descriptive value, more a collection of jumbled statements fuelled by anger than a coherent story. The reader is left wondering what brought about this situation. You should go into specifics. Otherwise, the whole mess is rather repetitive, the cry of someone who thinks herself to be insightful concerning the human condition.
Robin the Jarbog 2003-10-02 ch 5,	This is beautifully done. And it's nice to know there's someone else who's been there.
Robin the Jarbog 2003-10-02 ch 1,	Very powerful. Beautiful and raw emotions, captured perfectly.
Isarandel 2003-09-20 ch 1,	//Meant to be this way? Meant to throw away a friendship of two years in one day? Meant to cause me this pain?// i can relate to that very closely. My friend did that to me, ending the friendship of two and a half years in a day. And the worst thing is, she still wants to talk about it, asking her friend to ask me to meet them at a place which i rejected... anyway, it's good written...
YellowRoseThorn 2003-06-09 ch 4,	... Raven... im sorry i cant say anything at the moment, you say shes the one in pain yeah but you are too, life is such a . im really sorry that you got to go through this, i want to help... but it like im trapped inside a locked door... i want to but its just that i can't...
YellowRoseThorn 2003-06-09 ch 3,	*. leaves but comes back* that really isnt a review but that is all i have to say: . and i wih i could help... .
YellowRoseThorn 2003-06-02 ch 2,	Im glad that you and lex are friends again... but you know that the trust you gave her can't go back to its regional place. but n e ways i hope things get relly better, espically your hand. lol. Chibi Neko-Chan^.~
Pandabear575 2003-05-18 ch 1,	omg that was written beautifully, i know the pain behind that story and i understand what it meant...that was very good the way you write it even though i know tha pain and anguish behind it...keep your head up it can and will get better just let it soon it will get better dont worry...yes those memories will stay with you and they will hurt but you can go on you can keep living ok...so head up and keep writtin talk lata ok Mandi
Snugglez 2003-05-16 ch 1,	Hey! Look I know you're goin threw a hard time- it feels like you waisted 2 years- like it meant nuttin- but from all of this look at how strong you are and how much you help the lives of others around you- i wish i could help you as much as you have me- but I will promise to be here whenever you feel you need my help. The greatest literature out from pain and agnst in our life. It will be hard but life's a and nuttin's perfect. Sorry Raven! You don't deserve this!
YellowRoseThorn 2003-05-13 ch 1,	Raven... im really sorry, i know you sont want to hear it. But i know how you feel, i been backstabbed to many times to count. I always be here for you. You know i will. Lylas!! Lane
hana no tenshi 2003-05-13 ch 1,	WELL I have a few more things to say to u, except that it was a very sad but beautifully written poem by u MM QUeen. First of all ...not everyone is the same and u shouldnt write everyone of because of one or two bad friendships, If I did that with all the supposed friends I had Id be all alone just because I was afraid to be hurt again. At the end of the day how will u know what it feels like to have true friends if u havent experienced fake and bad friends? And as for the whole I'll be there for u , as u say *... I have always been there for all of my friends no matter how close they were to me and even if they never stayed close to me when I needed them. But I have to because I know what it is to be a friend and I have found people that I would trust with my life. Im all alone right now, away from them and I can only count on my self but I know they are there and if I said I need u now they would be right over, I was feeling really depressed a few minutes ago, crying even thought that doesnt do me any good I felt like releasing,and then I called them and I said I was depressed and they started to make me feel better , it only took them seconds to make me laugh.thats because they know me and because they will always be there just like I am. All this useless story was to make u realise that not everyone is the way that u have experienced already. trust but be careful who u trust. SO I will say this and I hope u dont think Im just saying it, Im always here to listen if u want to talk, Im always here to just talk about anything, and even though here is in England and u r not here Ill be there for u , if u want me too as much as I can be. Cause u r never alone and u shouldnt be alone. Even though u dont know me well. Hey at least Im here! Alive like u , most of the times depressed like u , and totally crazy. waves* see Im here ^_^ Ja ne Eva-chan

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