I like it.
blood, check
her, check
knife .. hey, wait a minute!
(just kidding)

good work.

hi,
erin dude ur poems are great i still wanna turn one in to a song.
ok now for some reall reviewing.( becomes serious)
thats a very nice choice of words young lady very nice.
ok back to me
n.e ways i liked it i found it i read it what more could u ask.
c u later

that was kinda morbid, but really well written, i like! good work