This is a really beautiful poem, I love it.

that was awesome, and I think thats exactly how I would feel in that situation, I think I could see the horrors of the holocaust just reading your take on a single persons job, well done. Oh, and my poem "her" has a part 2, now, I would like you to critique it please.

MM. Holocaust. I love that word... Makes me think of Tool. Any ways, nice strong poem you've got here. Really nice, infact. I'm going to have to read all your other works now.

This is great

that was amazing. really powerful, i can't sum it up very well but it was truly great. you really captured the sadness must have been felt from havign their famiy pulled away from them. i wish i hadn't dont so much work on the holocaust at school because this made me feel ... just regretful.

Cali.

goosebumbs! good job!

simply amazing...beautiful. as usual. i love your writing so much...ack. great job. meh...

Oh you all are studying about the halocaust too? Did you see that really depressing movie with the actuall footage from the camps? This was really good depressing subject but really good

Very well versed, with a nice rhythm that contributes to the tragic effect. Admirable poetry. I'd try to expand on the subject matter, however- but all in good time.

Strong emotions. Beautiful poem.